Stand In The Rain Poem by Lyn Paul
Stand In The Rain
A glance
At everything
What, Does it mean?
The Money, Is nothing
It's the things
That we have seen
How have we dealt
With each step
Of each day
Have I handled things right?
Or the absolute wrong way?
I now see
I don't care
For the falseness of living
Humans are a race
A face of believing
Believing life is
A material gift
This upsets the calm
Its a destroying rift
It's not till you age
You've closed so many a door
You look back
And see
Just what was this for?
I am now the calm
I can't change the time
I can't change the pain
I can change what it takes
To Stand in the rain
Copyright Reserve August 2019
Lyn Paul
Insightful and confronting. At least standing in the rain causes no pain.
Excellent write my friend. I like the flow, the rhythm... and the rhyme. It is also deeply insightful.
I can't change the time I can't change the pain I can change what it takes To Stand in the rain....outstanding conceptualization. Time can't be changed, but resolve can be changed. A great philosophical poem on life and death has been astutely delineated. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10
I can't change the time I can't change the pain I can change what it takes To Stand in the rain- - - - - - excellent closing lines for a brilliant introspective poem 10+++++++
What matters most? The things we've seen... Beautifully conveyed in the delightful poem.
The last four lines are so inspiring! A beautiful poem, just like the flower that comes after it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Very nice poem, Lyn. I like the second stanza best.