Urgently Poem by Lyn Paul

interesting how you structure your piece great work

I guess money is only a problem when people steal or misuse it, A brilliant write, loved it, -Off to buy a money tree.

Beautiful poem about money wonderfully structured won my heart! Kudos!

Short, sharp staccato lines, impact and meaning in tight lines. I Like this a lot.

The Blble says that the love of money is the root of all evil. You have written very responsively on this important subject!

Plant a seed/it is what we need... great slogan but many times we don't do it even we know it....a beautiful poem!

THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint.

money is just one poor option stealing the many opportunities for a friendly adoption share and care is where riches lie so much more fun than buy, buy, buy

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. We cannot deny rhe importance of money. It enables one to put food on the table. And the basic necessities in life is sustainable. Yet, when life is centered on money and that everything revolves on it, then happiness in life ceases.to exist. When we are governed by money, the beauty of our heart is eliminated. Wonderfully written. Liked the form. It conveys the message of this marvelous write more powerful.

A different sort of thinking. Thanks for sharing it with us.