Spring Of Desires! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

One beautiful face rose up From the crystalline stream Just one face, grasped my memories! This indeed beautiful Geetha....! Lovely words couched in the fervent emotion of love!

A lovely poem I was enchanted with its beauty.

Lovely! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Nectar dripped from the lips While I plucked a petal From the rosy memories- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I found these lines so particularly charming and alluring, Geetha. It is one of the joys in reading poetry to come across such fresh and evocative images and I thank you so much for sharing them.....10+++++ on this Spring of Desires

'One beautiful face rose up From the crystalline stream Just one face, grasped my memories! ' - That's a wonderful expression Geetha, very evocative. Loved this short poem.

An impressive heart crushing and animated image is emerging slowly. A nice poetic imagination, Geetha. Thank you very much.

A petal from rosy memories says the poem I felt the poem is a pearl from the memory of shells.

Hello Geetha, So beautifully penned with exquisite imagery. One beautiful face rose up from the crystalline stream. Wish i knew whose beautiful face it was! ! ! :) Lovely poem

Impressive work...Virtually flawless stanzaic structure moves with the glide of a shiny new coin tossed across a freshly glaced ice-pond...Stellar crafting & imagescape, indeed. ~FjR~