Gert Strydom

Veteran Poet - 1,639 Points (03 April 1964 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

Space Haiku’s - Poem by Gert Strydom

Satellite observe
mist cloud unexpectedly
reactor flaming.

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Big eye satellite
look at our activities
on the sandy beach.

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Big space telescope
tuned fine on solar system
looks for small angels.

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The white moon hangs sickle
above the bright morning sun
in the dull blue sky.

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An eye peeps far off
and telescope watch blue sun
in very dark place.

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A black round circle is
a blue ring in photosphere
in glamour photo.

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The moon eclipses with
copper red colour burning
next to dull blue star.

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Blue-white glimmering
diamond ring impress in
eclipse of the sun.


Comments about Space Haiku’s by Gert Strydom

  • Gold Star - 5,676 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/17/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    Very nice series of space haiku... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (4/30/2014 1:00:00 PM)

    Agree with Sunprincess! Is women need to stick together! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 1:26:00 AM)

    ........figured out this is my favourite.....very nice..
    ~Blue-white glimmering
    diamond ring impress in
    eclipse of the sun. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 7:31:00 PM)

    ........so impressive...can't say which stanza I like the best....enjoyed all... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 18, 2011


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