Gert Strydom

Veteran Poet - 1,639 Points (03 April 1964 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

Space Haiku’s - Poem by Gert Strydom

Satellite observe
mist cloud unexpectedly
reactor flaming.


Big eye satellite
look at our activities
on the sandy beach.


Big space telescope
tuned fine on solar system
looks for small angels.


The white moon hangs sickle
above the bright morning sun
in the dull blue sky.


An eye peeps far off
and telescope watch blue sun
in very dark place.


A black round circle is
a blue ring in photosphere
in glamour photo.


The moon eclipses with
copper red colour burning
next to dull blue star.


Blue-white glimmering
diamond ring impress in
eclipse of the sun.

Comments about Space Haiku’s by Gert Strydom

  • Gold Star - 5,676 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/17/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    Very nice series of space haiku... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (4/30/2014 1:00:00 PM)

    Agree with Sunprincess! Is women need to stick together! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 1:26:00 AM)

    ........figured out this is my favourite.....very nice..
    ~Blue-white glimmering
    diamond ring impress in
    eclipse of the sun. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 7:31:00 PM) impressive...can't say which stanza I like the best....enjoyed all... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 18, 2011

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