Song Of Love Poem by Soumita Sarkar

Song Of Love

Rating: 4.8


The day I chanced to see
A poem floating like a song
I knew for sure it shall be
You for whom I long…long
Your smile touched me dear
I gazed with amazement
When shall you come near?
For the engagement
The pages of my life
Is inked in your name
Many bees in one hive
You are only my dame…my dame
You bloom in me like daisy
Your thoughts shall never die
For you I live Oh! Fairy
My heart see sings to fly…to fly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 26 June 2013

Though many bees in one hive There will be one The one and only Queen Let it be yours- Dame of your house The queen of your house

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Indranil Bhaduri 28 June 2013

Beautiful and romantic..Loved it

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Farah Ilyas 28 June 2013

hmmm beautiful romantic poem marvelously embellished with emotions

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2021

What a delightful last line! A magnificent poem..Top score

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Soumita Sarkar 10 January 2022

Thank Sir

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 April 2016

Your smile touched me dear I gazed with amazement When shall you come near? For you i live oh Fairy..... very nice love poem. full of desire and passion, love this poem. thank you. tony

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

A melodious song of love which has all the ingredients for a romantic write..... passion, beautiful diction and emotion! Enjoyed it Soumita! Thanks!

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Ramesh Rai 24 June 2015

Your smile touched me dear I gazed with amazement When shall you come near? your this line is really fabulous. Overall a beautiful concept with imagery thoughts.

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Soumita Sarkar 24 June 2015

Thanks...

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Khairul Ahsan 14 December 2013

'You bloom in me like daisy Your thoughts shall never die' A nice song of love. Melodious.

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