Soumita Sarkar Ray

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Song Of Love - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

The day I chanced to see
A poem floating like a song
I knew for sure it shall be
You for whom I long…long
Your smile touched me dear
I gazed with amazement
When shall you come near?
For the engagement
The pages of my life
Is inked in your name
Many bees in one hive
You are only my dame…my dame
You bloom in me like daisy
Your thoughts shall never die
For you I live Oh! Fairy
My heart see sings to fly…to fly


Comments about Song Of Love by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (4/4/2016 9:17:00 AM)

    Your smile touched me dear
    I gazed with amazement
    When shall you come near?

    For you i live oh Fairy..... very nice love poem. full of desire and passion, love this poem. thank you. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George Valsa George (7/22/2015 6:42:00 AM)

    A melodious song of love which has all the ingredients for a romantic write..... passion, beautiful diction and emotion! Enjoyed it Soumita! Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (6/24/2015 8:43:00 AM)

    Your smile touched me dear
    I gazed with amazement
    When shall you come near?
    your this line is really fabulous. Overall a beautiful concept with imagery thoughts. (Report) Reply

    Soumita Sarkar Soumita Sarkar (6/24/2015 9:00:00 AM)

    Thanks...

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (12/14/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    'You bloom in me like daisy
    Your thoughts shall never die'
    A nice song of love. Melodious. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (7/12/2013 9:58:00 AM)

    Good write..Very touching poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair Dinesh Nair (7/10/2013 7:25:00 AM)

    A song of love and much more....
    Weaving into the mind as a gossamer of fine thread speaking out its spinning charm... A good poem indeed Madam Soumya Sarkar (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    Your smile touched me dear
    I gazed with amazement//// lovely lines. it touched me...10 (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (6/29/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    beautiful song.very romantic. loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas Farah Ilyas (6/28/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    hmmm beautiful romantic poem marvelously embellished with emotions (Report) Reply

  • Indranil Bhaduri Indranil Bhaduri (6/28/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful and romantic..Loved it (Report) Reply

  • Sekharan Pookkat Sekharan Pookkat (6/26/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    Though many bees in one hive
    There will be one
    The one and only Queen
    Let it be yours-
    Dame of your house
    The queen of your house (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013


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