Come and hold me tight
With no streak of light
to come close between two
sublime bodies of faith
Come smell me through mind
Shallow and depth defined
Then wind of plain delight
Shall bathe you every night
Come see me with your soul
that craves for a cozy nest
and crimson melodious feather
to caress and ignite forever
Come feel me with your tongue
Lives so meaningless shall
rejuvenate in my spring
to love bloom, pain shall ring
Come and read mystery in eyes
That spell magic on beholders
And sends rivers of solace
down the reeds of lonely gates
A lovely penning with a romantic feel and intense emotion. Enjoyed your expression.
Hold me tight, Come and smell me with defined depth. delight shall bathe you every night. See me with your soul, cozy nest, caress, ignite. Feel me with your tounge and sense the mystery in my eyes. Oh Saumita, it is passion, it is eros, it is love and it has depth. thank you for this pleasant poem. i like it soo much. tony
Sensual, romantic, and vivid in it's description... Loved the manner in which this monologue actually appeals to the intended speaker and the final stanza: 'Come and read mystery in eyes That spell magic on beholders And sends rivers of solace down the reeds of lonely gates' - is a really fine ending... Love indeed educates us.., Thank you for sharing :)
With no streak of light! Only with the muse of sweet love. Nice piece of work.
Come smell me through mind Shallow and depth defined Then wind of plain delight Shall bathe you every night......smelling through the mind.. original expressions dear poetess. tony
Amazing eloquence and emotions. A lovely and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
A passionate piece beautifully rendered poetically. I came across accidentally. Really some accidents are good in life.
come close between two sublime bodies of faith come and smell me, Come see me with your soul Come feel me with your tongue Come and read mystery in eyes wonderful lines full of love and passion... thank u dear poet. dev
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This flow of beauty soothes my soul, such an amazing romantic touch leaving heart prints within. I love the magic that trickles so beautifully though this poem...Thank you for sharing Soumita.....