Touch Me..... See Me Poem by Soumita Sarkar

Touch Me..... See Me

Rating: 4.8


Come and hold me tight
With no streak of light
to come close between two
sublime bodies of faith

Come smell me through mind
Shallow and depth defined
Then wind of plain delight
Shall bathe you every night

Come see me with your soul
that craves for a cozy nest
and crimson melodious feather
to caress and ignite forever

Come feel me with your tongue
Lives so meaningless shall
rejuvenate in my spring
to love bloom, pain shall ring

Come and read mystery in eyes
That spell magic on beholders
And sends rivers of solace
down the reeds of lonely gates

Sunday, March 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 29 July 2015

This flow of beauty soothes my soul, such an amazing romantic touch leaving heart prints within. I love the magic that trickles so beautifully though this poem...Thank you for sharing Soumita.....

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Amitava Sur 03 August 2015

A lovely penning with a romantic feel and intense emotion. Enjoyed your expression.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2015

Hold me tight, Come and smell me with defined depth. delight shall bathe you every night. See me with your soul, cozy nest, caress, ignite. Feel me with your tounge and sense the mystery in my eyes. Oh Saumita, it is passion, it is eros, it is love and it has depth. thank you for this pleasant poem. i like it soo much. tony

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Souren Mondal 08 November 2015

Sensual, romantic, and vivid in it's description... Loved the manner in which this monologue actually appeals to the intended speaker and the final stanza: 'Come and read mystery in eyes That spell magic on beholders And sends rivers of solace down the reeds of lonely gates' - is a really fine ending... Love indeed educates us.., Thank you for sharing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

With no streak of light! Only with the muse of sweet love. Nice piece of work.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2021

A wonderful poem.. fascinating expression! Liked it

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Dr. Antony Theodore 22 February 2021

Come smell me through mind Shallow and depth defined Then wind of plain delight Shall bathe you every night......smelling through the mind.. original expressions dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2020

Amazing eloquence and emotions. A lovely and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 January 2019

A passionate piece beautifully rendered poetically. I came across accidentally. Really some accidents are good in life.

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Dev Anand 16 August 2017

come close between two sublime bodies of faith come and smell me, Come see me with your soul Come feel me with your tongue Come and read mystery in eyes wonderful lines full of love and passion... thank u dear poet. dev

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