Soumita Sarkar Ray

Silver Star - 4,256 Points (Kolkata)

Adieu To Addiction - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

This craving to remain connected
Is a sole bane of internet
Minds taking shelter in smart phone
Disclose that they are eternally lone

They rely on second’s updates to remain assured
This is a mask to conceal that they are insecured
Number of virtual friends keep on adding
Alas! Not a shoulder for plaintive sharing

When you are sullen and spirits sound low
Members at home grow genuine concern to show
Stop paying interest to social sites endlessly
It’s time to invest quality time in your family

Comments about Adieu To Addiction by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Freshman - 532 Points Joshua Terpening (9/30/2014 11:29:00 AM)

    Believe it or not, flesh and blood is more real. Indeed. Peace and love. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,256 Points Soumita Sarkar (9/26/2014 3:42:00 AM)

    Thanks Nalini Ma'm for your comments.......Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,948 Points Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi (9/25/2014 12:11:00 AM)

    Speaks all about guilty now. Very well expressed and penned (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,888 Points Savita Tyagi (2/3/2014 4:34:00 PM)

    True internet supports the underlying craving to stay connected. It also is a support for the people who live away from families. Enjoyed the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Moody Blue (7/3/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    Social networking is an addiction, , , the more you use, , the more you wanna use..............A nice way of spreading the fact specially for the youngsters....Gr8 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (6/19/2013 5:02:00 AM)

    Truth told boldly. A good reminder poem Soumita. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 244 Points Rick Adriolo (6/18/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    Good poem about modern society.. very nice write! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013

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