Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Some Kisses Give Pain For Eternity - Poem by Vishal Sharma

Days are spending in the mighty arms of the fear
though, the matter is so grave, i must have to appear,
and, tell the world, taking a sip of tea, my intention,
the words i wrote, now in fire, in fire as i gave me tension.

yet, i have not decided, what to do with the rest,
make a decision, and will prove a decision made in haste,
i linger gasping at my beloved eyes, whole night long,
that pick of time, i kept wandering how would be my song.

and, now the arrogance of her aroma proving me fatal,
i inside, died, though having no participation in a battle,
cruelity done by you will never never hamper me in future,
as in your belly, regarding only me, our seed nurture.

may you survive, by grace of god, till posterity,
but, love, listen'some kisses give us pain for eternity.


Comments about Some Kisses Give Pain For Eternity by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie Shah Jehan Ashrafi (9/6/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    emotionally different and the theme too flows..good write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (6/27/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    A poem for posterity. The burning of your words could be literal
    or a symbolic fire, but the feeling and the pain are apparent.
    Good title and close to your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Kelley (6/24/2013 9:00:00 PM)

    the truth is amazingly spoken (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/23/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    yeah, thats true
    i appreciate your words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (6/22/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Just hold on, like you are and with all your words. A grim kiss is not forever. All changes! ! ! Strong and belíssimo Poet! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/22/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    A nice poem Vishal. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/22/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    If you burned you words it was a grave mistake.Your poems are your children. Eternal children.
    They have a life of there own. Destroying them is destroying you. Poems like people change over time
    and what you read today will not be the same poem thirty years from now. Your words are precious.
    Dont't ever deny that and anyone who disputes that is a very tiny person. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,070 Points Sekharan Pookkat (6/22/2013 9:15:00 AM)

    Any thing out of place is dust- It gives us pain Your songs are beautiful Vishal.Make a strong decision about your future and proceed-My best wishes (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/22/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    test of love, thanks,
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013


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