Soft Poem by Andrew Hinton

Soft



They said I was too soft,
That my dreams were too aloft.
They don't know the monster that I hide,
That is clawing and fighting deep inside.

Do they want me to set it free?
Though in chaos my soul would be?
They say that I over think,
But I have come back from the brink.

I know the things I am capable of,
But I chose instead to search for love.
So now they may call me weak,
And tell me of a future bleak.

In them I see the same mistakes,
And I wonder if they know the stakes.
But maybe I am just bitter,
Tired of playing a babysitter.

Let them go and play their lives,
Just like children caught with knives.
But joy and happiness you know they will find,
while your sorrow and depression slowly bind.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After talking to a few girls about a problem I was having with their friend, they ended up telling me that I had made mistakes and had issues that made me at fault for the situation. I wrote this in response to say that I know my mistakes, and I see them in other people too. And while I don't disagree with the assessment that I to work them out, I wanted them to know their issues and mistakes are similar and that we are actually seeing eye to eye, not one person looking down on the other.
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