Treasure Island

Dipy Hermonite


She Ditched Me


For the first time in my life
I fell in love with a girl
She said she’d always be by my side
Whenever I needed her
Oh she was sooo…., so sweet
Like a cool spring on a hot summer’s day
But like the hundreds of fools she must have fooled
My heart’s broken till this day

Coz she ditched me
Yeah folks that’s right
She left me in the middle of nowhere
And only half as bright
Oh mama she ditched me
Yeah mama that’s right
Once again I’m a loner
With hardly any more will to fight

I started avoiding people
I’d always keep away
I’d just sit there in the corner
And dream every day
My friends thought I was crazy
They started avoiding me
But they didn’t know anything, you see

She said she’d always love me
Be it morning, noon or night
She’d stand by my side through thick and thin
Even when things weren’t so right
Each day used to be so heavenly
Each night was full of song
But seriousness was not a part of me
And I guess that’s where I went wrong
So she ditched me …..! ! !

One day she said “My darling though I love you
I’ve got to think about my future as well
I know you can never be serious about your life
But why do you want to spoil mine as well”

Oh my darling, my sweetheart, why didn’t you trust me
I’d have made my future – for you
I’d have sweated and slogged throughout the years
To see that you were happy too

But now life means nothing to me
I don’t care about rights or wrongs
I’ve left my future to destiny
Though my friends say it’s foolish and wrong

You know why?
Coz she ditched me ….! !

Submitted: Friday, August 23, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013

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  • Ajit Chaliha (11/20/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    Love is music, created by lovers with various instruments. When you do not tune these instruments frequently, the music turn to just noise. Try bringing back to tune the instruments of love. (Report) Reply

  • Soumita Sarkar (10/4/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    one person can never decide upon anybody's life.....good write...this should be a past dream. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 3:00:00 PM)

    love has its weakness same as strength. a strong love will survive a weak one will not. best to find out up front a good write (Report) Reply

  • Lynne Fincherspringarden (8/24/2013 11:06:00 AM)

    A good portrayal of the frailty of human love. And good thing for your comment so that your readers will not worry after you. All emotion has value and sadness is a valid emotion. But we must never allow the storms of life to take us under. We have to be like strong sailing ships and weather the storm and see it through to calm and peaceful seas until we see the sun again. The sun always rises so we must never give up on love. Life is partly driven by destiny and we have no control over the storms but we due owe it to ourselves and others who care for us to weather the storm and once the storm has past, to once again guide our ships with good intention. Great feeling and expression in all your poetry. Keep up the good writing. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (8/23/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    To love and lost is better not to be loved at all. A potent write that we
    all can relate to at one time or another. We can get up shake off the
    dust and keep moving. Love will come again whenever and wherever.
    Please read my poem Love Seesaw. Enjoyed this write. (Report) Reply

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