Dipy Hermonite


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  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (8/20/2013 2:26:00 PM)

    Hi Dipy! I really enjoy reading your poems! Keep up the awesome work!

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Christine Mc|cherry (8/18/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    Dipy, your words are very moving. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for getting in touch.
    You write from the heart. That is where poetry should come from. Keep writing.

  • Rookie - 27 Points Pasquale Dimeola (6/11/2007 3:15:00 PM)

    Dipy- Of your two poems, I preferred 'Child'. It is touching and sad. I saw a sight in Naples, Italy that was almost similiar. However in my case, the child had a despicable mother instead of a hard working father. You can read the poem I wrote in reference to it titled 'Circumvesuviana Lamentation'. Your poem 'The Silently Weeping Tree, ' has its moments, however personally I have not been one to humanize objects or animals in lieu of human suffering. There are too many people suffering to concern myself with other life forms. Interesting poetry-Keep at it! -Pasquale

Your World My Lord

The train moved swiftly through the night,
O'er rivers, fields and glens.
The girl was rocking in her sleep,
Smiling every now and then.
Though the rags that she wore on her body,
Had seen many a better day.
She had been told by her daddy,
It had been destined for them that way.

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