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Dipy Hermonite


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  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (8/20/2013 2:26:00 PM)

    Hi Dipy! I really enjoy reading your poems! Keep up the awesome work!

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Christine Mc|cherry (8/18/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    Dipy, your words are very moving. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for getting in touch.
    You write from the heart. That is where poetry should come from. Keep writing.

  • Rookie - 16 Points Pasquale Dimeola (6/11/2007 3:15:00 PM)

    Dipy- Of your two poems, I preferred 'Child'. It is touching and sad. I saw a sight in Naples, Italy that was almost similiar. However in my case, the child had a despicable mother instead of a hard working father. You can read the poem I wrote in reference to it titled 'Circumvesuviana Lamentation'. Your poem 'The Silently Weeping Tree, ' has its moments, however personally I have not been one to humanize objects or animals in lieu of human suffering. There are too many people suffering to concern myself with other life forms. Interesting poetry-Keep at it! -Pasquale

She Ditched Me

For the first time in my life
I fell in love with a girl
She said she’d always be by my side
Whenever I needed her
Oh she was sooo…., so sweet
Like a cool spring on a hot summer’s day
But like the hundreds of fools she must have fooled
My heart’s broken till this day

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