Shadows Of The Past Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Shadows Of The Past

Rating: 4.3


As I rise through
the shadows
of the past

Silhouettes of fire
burn through
my hearts desire

Telling me
I have a life to live
and life to give

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 05 October 2011

yes you do! great poem!

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2011

Bomb! I like this..YES we need to be bright and do and should do like this...Pain and deepest hurt could be a part where it trying to constrain our strength.if we pass it we will win...and ready for next test.. :) Again it was beautifully written...Fight for live and there's more to give a hope to other...It simply Great, Dave! _Unwritten Soul

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H - K 05 October 2011

though it's short its still good, nice poem.

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Melina Yepez 05 October 2011

Love it! ! it was short and sweet thanks for the invite to read

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Stefanie Fontker 05 October 2011

Living through the darkness is a hard task, but you're strong enough to have done it, and to do it again. Lovely poetry, one of my favourites of yours.

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Jinal Oswal 11 November 2011

'I have a life to live and life to give' A real powerful end... It encourages... Wonderful write :)

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Crimson Love 10 October 2011

This is a beautiful poem! shadows of the past remain with us, they just become easier to manage, truly a magnificent poem......

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Vipins Puthooran 07 October 2011

And If we live through the path of truth, the wings of darkness will be broken unless live and let live! ! ! ! A good poem

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Shadow Girl 06 October 2011

Short but powerful, like these little gems that pack a lot of punch...great write. -SG

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Rouge Stallion 05 October 2011

interesting... wish i was as lively as you. Haha. good job

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