Roaring Poem by Abdul Wahab

Roaring

Rating: 4.8


The ocean is wide
Roars in her own soul inside
With current and tide.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salema Khatun 11 March 2012

This is a very nice haiku, the word ''roaring'' signifies a lot , in our life too...hence a good use of the metaphor. I like the little poem very much.

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Vipins Puthooran 11 March 2012

Roaring of sea Buzzing of bee All I can hear when I'm not buzy)))) ******************** I like your haiku......'tis a nature haiku! ! !

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Dave Walker 13 March 2012

A really beautiful poem, a fantastic write.

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Rony Sk 14 March 2012

You tell us a real thing. Thank you. I like it very much. The poem is very good.Thanks Thanks.............

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Shahzia Batool 14 March 2012

Ocean, Green or blue or iron-gray' As the light strikes you' Primordial flood, Relentless and remorseless Like a woman in rage. Mongameli Mabona's THE SEA is reminded by this short poem beautifully written...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 August 2012

stunning job is done

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Rizvana Parveen 20 March 2012

very philosophical....n...thought provoking

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 19 March 2012

beautiful words with in-depth meaning. bravo!

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Unwritten Soul 17 March 2012

Turbulence on the surface secret something wide Mystical the ocean too have posses mystery inside Unrevealed until we dive deep to see never seen side Now we know discover life as we know how to get bright_UNwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 16 March 2012

Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself... This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1!

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