Relinquish Poem by BrandEn Billy

Relinquish

Rating: 5.0


You were not lost without me as I was you.
I came to doubt our benevolence was true.
You let me plummet in ways that's unfair.
I gave more than a rapport could bare.
You told me I was farcical and enervating.
I gave you reliance and sincerity.
You know I will never relinquish you in my heart.
I know in my mind nevertheless we can never restart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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