Patricia Grantham

Silver Star - 3,354 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Refreshed


Wake up and smell the sweet roses
Nice aromas wafting up your noses
Rise up from your slumbering sleep
Open the door and take a big peep

The sun has risen and shines anew
Earth renewed from the morning dew
A day appears just for me and you
Arise and see another day through

Submitted: Thursday, April 24, 2014
Edited: Thursday, April 24, 2014

Topic of this poem: sleep


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Comments about this poem (Refreshed by Patricia Grantham )

  • Gold Star - 7,501 Points Amitava Sur (5/31/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    Reading this poem right in the morning very honestly I feel so refreshed that I remember you repeatedly now Patricia! ! A lovely poem I read. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 824 Points Om Chawla (5/9/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    What a lovely write and so well rhymed, Pat. I join Valsa in wishing you the ensuing days to be full peace, delight and beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,751 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/3/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    The sun has risen and shines anew
    Earth renewed from the morning dew
    Beautiful day opens up. Rise up and enjoy the surroundings. Enjoy the life. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 235 Points Goodenough Sakhile(shotaromeo) Dlamini (4/30/2014 11:11:00 AM)

    Rise up from your slumbering sleep
    Open the door and take a big peep, i can feel that mornig eagerness (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (4/27/2014 6:14:00 AM)

    Lovely poem... Pat! A very promising day is at our door step....! Let us greet this day with rising delight and hope that the ensuing days also will be as beautiful as today...! Small and sweet write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,625 Points Herbert Guitang (4/24/2014 7:36:00 PM)

    Wow. I voted and rate 10. (Report) Reply

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