Treasure Island

Neela Nath


Raining


It's raining outside
and flooding my smoky
and burdened mind.
It's raining,
and I don't know
from where the
clouds have covered
my sunny slates!
Witchery of a black
and two white headless
witches have taken
the sun away, away
from my blue!
Beauty isn't in color,
beauty isn't in eyes.
Beauty I never have
seen which never dies!
The mind with the
aroma of heaven
hasn't ever praised me.
Envy is their cup
of tea, and they torment
the cloudless me.
It's raining inside
it's raining in my heart.
Will anyone please
can stop the falling
with blow of your love?

Submitted: Tuesday, March 11, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, March 11, 2014

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  • Valsa George (3/14/2014 12:13:00 AM)

    It rains within and without....! The heavy clouds shed their grief in the form of rain drops and the mind unburdens through tears and sighs! A mind with the aroma of heaven is more beautiful than any other beautiful object.... but hardly anyone sees its beauty.... that is why the mind is in pain.... great write! ! Be consoled.... time will reveal the beauty! ! (Report) Reply

  • Mr. Nobody (3/13/2014 11:28:00 AM)

    Loves warm breath escapes my being,
    accept it, and know, life is worth seeing!
    I only offer that which I am,
    Be the love, feel the love, see the love, madame (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (3/11/2014 11:11:00 PM)

    The rains havd clouded your vision,
    Making it hard to make good decisions.
    When you least expect to find a friend
    look beside you they're here again.
    Remember once they numbered more than blades of grass
    Some have gone, some will last. (Report) Reply

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