Neela Nath


A River Of The Will


A river of the will,
Plays in my mind.
I call her to come out,
But she stays behind.
She flows and says-
O, let me do the thing,
Which I desire;
I'm now a spring.
Just telling this,
She jumps from myself,
Riding on a cloud,
She flies like an elf.
With a pensive mood,
I sit by the window,
It starts raining outside,
My room gathers shadow.
I think, where's my will?
She isn't in the sky-
A whisper comes in my ear,
I can't believe my eye....
The drops of rain fall there,
Wetting my hot face,
Tell me-'Dear we are here,
Giving you cool brace.'
Then go back to the river,
To be again the cloud,
To flash with the thunder,
To roar aloud!

Submitted: Saturday, May 26, 2012
Edited: Saturday, June 21, 2014

Topic of this poem: river


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(It's the wish to hail rain in summer.It comes true ultimately)

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  • Silver Star - 3,324 Points Rajesh Thankappan (12/29/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    Free will is hard to contain and it makes its own course. Exhilarating lines. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,138 Points Piyush Dey (8/6/2014 10:56:00 PM)

    very beautiful imagination, connecting will with the rain. i liked it.
    nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,435 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/12/2014 8:12:00 AM)

    The poet expresses the feeling of rain and the river in such beautiful poem and it is fine. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (6/21/2014 2:07:00 PM)

    .........so unforgettable and a wonderful choice for member poem of the day.......congratulations.....and I loved reading this poem again..... (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    Thank you Sunprincess.

  • Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    Yes Sir.But, I wanted to mean, A whisper tells......But, later, it got mixed with the drops of rain from where the whisper has come.to clear the confusion I edited it.Thanks again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (6/21/2014 10:01:00 AM)

    Good write, tell me not tells me if you mean the drops of rain, plural, river needs an article, to my ear would be better, so a good write that needs some work. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for your wise comment.Yes, that's a silly mistake of which I should have been more careful.I'm correcting it soon.

  • Gold Star - 17,180 Points Valsa George (6/21/2014 8:21:00 AM)

    Congratulations on this poem being selected as the poem of the day! Our will sometimes plays hide and seek, but comes to our aid, depending upon the strength of our desire.... Great imagination! (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2014 11:07:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Valsaji.

  • Gold Star - 4,840 Points Savita Tyagi (6/21/2014 7:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Loved the playfulness and the thought. How easily our will takes off from us but returns in need as well. congratulations and thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,431 Points Sayeed Abubakar (6/21/2014 7:48:00 AM)

    Very nice poem, Didi. Congratulation it being published as member poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/21/2014 7:19:00 AM)

    Congrats Neela, Beautiful poem......filled with wonderful imagination. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Ravin Sharma (6/21/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    one of most beautiful poem, i have ever read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,774 Points Ramesh Rai (6/21/2014 6:01:00 AM)

    Congratulations! ! !
    Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (6/21/2014 5:35:00 AM)

    I have unfortunately a different perspective on will. It perhaps is the most misunderstood euphemism by mankind. Euphemism for clear understanding and the acceptance by ones self of that knowledge which was understood. When the self sees with crystal clarity the hoops and sketches of the intellect and yet stands firm distinct content and in command what results is will. I knew this after I managed to quit smoking, will power, will, be it good will or evil, is nothing but a popular myth, what children are fed from school days by those who don't have an iota of understanding about what it is. I loved your poem from its structural sense, making sense and reason flow with natures bounty in harmony and confluence with your true self. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/22/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for your review.

  • Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2014 3:20:00 AM)

    Thank you Akhtar Jawadji. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/21/2014 3:19:00 AM)

    Thanks Shahzia.my dear friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (6/21/2014 2:40:00 AM)

    Congratulations neela :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,636 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/21/2014 1:40:00 AM)

    Congratulations, this poem deserved the honor it got. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,636 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/13/2014 12:04:00 PM)

    Rains have always played a role in human life. Poets are inspired by rains and it promotes their creative abilities.
    Your poem is a nice creation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (3/18/2014 4:29:00 AM)

    great poem, dear...I salute your imagination, I pray this year god bestows upon us his blessing and there be plenty of rains......your poem flows as swiftly as the river in your imagination....great wrk dear (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (12/21/2013 7:27:00 PM)

    wow...I love your imagination...I could hear the drops of rain falling...see the flash with thunder... feel the drops of rain on my hot face...your poem pulled me in to another world...astonishing.. (Report) Reply

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