Raging Sea, Raging Heart Poem by louis rams

Raging Sea, Raging Heart

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the raging seas causing the waters to rise
the raging seas engulfing you and i.
it has no mercy, it has no heart
it cares not if it tears you apart.

but you have a heart or so they say.
so why do you treat my love this way?
what do you gain to see me cry
when you tell me all those lies.
your heart is like the raging sea
it can no longer comfort me.

it has become treacherous and deep
and has left my soul to weep.
what made your calmness disappear.
is it that you had some fears?
or is it that there is something deep inside
that you feel you must hide.

if you want to destroy my love.

then drown it if you must
for in you i'll put my trust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 March 2016

Superb poem, this raging sea is the metaphor for life and wonderfully written, thanks for sharing..10+++

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This poem is one of the best you crafted.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 13 January 2010

well written from a broken heart word flow with ease and emotion

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Pink Butterfly ... 13 January 2010

Well crafted poem! ! ! I flows gorgeously! ! ! ! God bless! ! ! -PinkButterfly-

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