.. Quotes For The Wise...** Poem by Eyan Desir

.. Quotes For The Wise...**

Rating: 4.5


Been successful in love
Is like two sides of a coin
Hearts afraid to crack
Live without its other half
Whiles love break hearts like dishes
Others will laugh.

Fools rush in pleasure like flies
Like babies we hear their cries.

True beauty isn't on a face
But locked in a heart

When tears wet the ground
Minds will open wide.

The wise are like open books
Ready to listen and learn
The wise become wiser
Whiles fools never learn
And become bigger fools

My heart walked through a dessert
But it didn't suffer from thirst
Only through life's storm
A soul can increase its faith

Life's monstrosities
Are crosses humans carry
Whiles they suffer, they become strong.

Struggles in life are building blocks
Building man for the future.

Money and power isn't sucess
But obstacles blinding man's eyes

Out of life's sweetest treasure
The most valuable gift
Is in the love of God.






June 04th 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 25 June 2009

You and your love potions..! ! ! The love FOR God and IN humans definitely helps...... Amen. Cheers. Subroto

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~ Jon London ~ 25 June 2009

great job bro....expressed in your unique ways....keep penning

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Sherif Monem 26 June 2009

Very nice poem. I have issue with: Money and power isn't sucess But obstacles blinding man's eyes u may need to temper these two lines.

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Mercedes Wilkerson 26 June 2009

I Do So Very Much LOVE This Poem Of Yours... The First Two Lines Grabed Me And Held Me Through The Whole Poem. It Is True That One May Never Know If The Love The Are In Will Land On Heads Or Tails - Good Or Bad. Keep Up Your Wonderful Work. -Mercedes E. Wilkerson

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Winnie Angel 26 June 2009

Loved ur lines.......My heart walked through a dessert But it didn't suffer from thirst Only through life's storm A soul can increase it's faith Winnie

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rago rago 20 July 2009

a wise write and beautiful presentation..........

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Ronell Warren Alman 09 July 2009

This is a golden write Eyan! Keep on writing!

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Out of life's sweetest treasure The most valuable gift Is in the love of God. money and power blind everybody... it is great write with good thoughts...10 read mine golden words...i am disgrace and come home

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Ben Gieske 07 July 2009

A lot of truth in what you say. I believe that true love has to include suffering. Not all suffering has to be evil. This line interests me in particular: When tears wet the ground Minds will open wide. Gives me something to ponder.

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comatose 03 July 2009

very true love doctor, good write

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