.. Walk Away (Dark Poem by Eyan Desir
.. Walk Away (Dark
.After all what I have done
To comfort and keep you warm
Sacrificing myself
For your happiness
Lending what I own
And not getting a cent in return
Still you deceive me
I could split your throat!
But I guess have learned
Don't lend what you
Can't afford to get back in return
I could split your throat
But silence can also kill
What we spit in the life of others
Return back in our own
I will take an expensive loss
Fight the pains!
And walk away
Hoping my eyes see better days.
Nice flow......welcome back to poemhunter sir.....Cheers....
A strong poem and full of enthusiasm! ! .........good piece...10/10 Merna
Hi Eyan: welcome back. Boy did you come back with a bang. Pain, hurt, feeling and the whole nine yards. Good write, Keep it up. Also look in on my latest My Special Child thanks your friend Lynn
Hi Eyan.. Enjoyed This Poem... Open, Honest, Intuitive, Handled This Topic Nicely. (Because if you've lived past 17 years of age (smile) ... You've been in the throes of relationship angst) Check out my poem 'Lack of Love'... I express similar sentiments MoonBee
i think its a little scary for me..lol but it was good...
Nice beggining and end...bit of chaos thru the middle...supposed 2 b like that?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This reflects pain, hurt. sacrifice and anger and finally resignation. Nice emotional burst.