. A Special Flower....♥ ..............(Love) Poem by Eyan Desir

. A Special Flower....♥ ..............(Love)

Rating: 3.4


Every once in a while
The beholder casts
A special wish
And a flower is created

For every day that comes.
This flower glows lovelier

With every breath it takes
Earth seems a little brighter

For with every sunrise
A heart becomes happier

With every breath it takes
The air seems sweeter

For every time my eyes see
This flower blossom
It's a miracle and privilege
To be in its presense

Every time I touch this flower
I appreciate living

For I 'm grateful for being alive
When you are my special flower.


All rights Eyan desir 30th Sep 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 09 October 2009

love dr... u v done a very nice poem...charming fresh well done cheers

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Corey Threet 09 October 2009

Wow beautiful poem really heartfelt and thoughtful. Really nice thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

wonderful visual metaphor: ''For every time I appreciate living I remember you are that special flower'' excellent symbolistic poem, lovely to read.....10+++++++++

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Poetic Soul 08 October 2009

A well penned write, caputures the essence of the inner beauty.

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Philip Alarie 08 October 2009

Very beautiful poem! Keep up the great writing! :)

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Vandavasu Vittal 04 March 2010

I witnessed the rain of moments That provoked me to think again in mystic houses we are tenants Willingly or unwillingly, love is slain Education has thought us everything, Everything but love, The tune divine to sing, Reaching from above. Bearing love with care Actually forsaking it gently Making love so bare Fictionally picturing it bluntly As flowers bloom It seems soon Love will prevail Undoing the wail

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Ihab Marzouk 05 November 2009

As I suppose, you are so much great at using the suitable words while writing. I have considered the flower as a person that I began to have feelings for and it was a strange sensibility that occured in the deaper place in my heart. I do thank you very well. I promised myself I would, if God permits it, read a poem in a day. I'm here. I'm honoured if you want to have a conversation.

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Ihab Marzouk 05 November 2009

As I suppose, you are so much great at using the suitable words while writing. I have considered the flower as a person that I began to have feelings for and it was a strange sensibility that occured in the deaper place in my heart. I do thank you very well.

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Ben Gieske 31 October 2009

I love flowers too and they can bring us great joy. I hope that you have a whole garden of flowers. Their blossoms don't last too long. Perhaps the thought will linger even though the blossom fades away or a poem such as yours is left in their place.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 16 October 2009

A special flower of a poem, indeed! Thanks to the poet for this beautiful, lovely piece!

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