.. My Pen********* Poem by Eyan Desir

.. My Pen*********

Rating: 4.8


Ideas small like tiny dots
Circulate to create
Greater thoughts
By using a pen.
They are constructed
From our head
the pen ejaculates
My every thought.

In sadness it comforts
In madness it bottles up
In love helps cough words
To put a flower in bed.

Throw away the knifes,
Don't take away life
Writers must always write
Poems that can change lives,
So People can realize
Using guns is unwise.

Love each other instead
Use the power in the pen
Talk about evil men.
I Wish they burn in hell!
Time up ring the bell!
Hope I wrote this well
Mightier than a sword.
The power in my pen

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire. All rights reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Wilkinson 21 March 2009

i like this my friend ideas do that - 10

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you wrote it well... fine job! keep going.. I have 99.. you need to catch up to me soon.. im glad you did not stop on 50...

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Malcolm The Last. 22 March 2009

'Ideas small like tiny dots', but no, your ideas are big, man.

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Shane Bonter 25 March 2009

Thats beautiful. the pen is the greatest weapon in any mans arsenal.

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Lalitha iyer 25 March 2009

Pen, but wait; lest your ink dry up and when new ideas crop up and ye find new papers .... pen not until you are upto the full.

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Raj Nandy 16 June 2009

Yes, I do feel that you have written it well indeed! I saw a DVD Movie called the 'QUILLS' with Kate Winslet in it, do see it, you will like it! 10! - Raj Nandy

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sumaira .....ir 04 April 2009

wonderful! ! TRUE said... 10/10 lvu sumi

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 April 2009

great pen that which you have.. pen which supplied from a such loving heart.. well done, , keep on.. hazem al..

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Joscelyn Alderdice 30 March 2009

Yes the pen is a great instrument indeed. This poem states it well. Awesome work!

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Ivor Hogg 28 March 2009

THe pen is mightier than the sword and can be used for good or ill like all weapons or tools

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