Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 5,336 Points (18 October 1964)

Q..... World Peace - Poem by Aufie Zophy

How many of us do sincerely pray for world peace
How many just think it is an illusion
If we go on not praying for world peace
If we go on thinking it is an illusion
Just an illusion it may remain.

Comments about Q..... World Peace by Aufie Zophy

  • Gold Star - 5,346 Points Ken E Hall (6/1/2013 1:47:00 AM)

    Good to bring it to the forefront world peace which has been unknown since time began, but even in our own backyard just tell another driver he's doing something wrong and he may hit you with a baseball bat...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lenore Lee (11/22/2011 5:10:00 PM)

    So true. We must all want and try for world peace in order for it to become more then an illusion. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (7/18/2011 7:32:00 AM)

    If nobody comes forward it is OK but a conscious being should feel for it. Undoubtedly, it is the need of the day. Nice truth is glorified in a few lines. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (6/22/2011 4:43:00 PM)

    amen! and the best prayers comes when peoples of all nations join hands and hearts and proclaim, 'enough is enough'! we are, after all, one family. like this poem a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leela Devi (11/30/2010 9:32:00 PM)

    the very cure of/for all time (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leela Devi (11/30/2010 4:15:00 AM)

    Peace is well penned from many angles- we need that for mankind could breathe a normal life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/18/2010 2:40:00 PM)

    To illusionist everything is illusion even their own existence [read peace] so let us forget that and in chorus Pray for peace what we’re lacking most especially individually…contemporary poem.. thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Aufie
    Ms. Nivedita
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Riekairu Calo (8/25/2010 8:27:00 AM)

    true, , , , , , it's really hard to get the world peace
    but it is possible to get... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (7/8/2010 6:32:00 AM)

    Since we are living on power, status and money-talking society; nobody will sincerely wish or hope better situation & condition for others. What they know is to make their position better and permit them to be more evil and hold on that.
    Destruction and disaster is the main package of war and it is only can be felt by people who facing the pain of war. They will pray for safety and security but others just can't walk the talk. Proposed action is only paper-talking on luxury & extravagant ceremony and war victims remain the same.
    Nobody willing to act unless they gain something and hidden agenda will cause pray become curse and war getting worse.
    Good smack to the un-sincere community. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2010 9:16:00 PM)

    If we go on thinking it is an illusion
    Just an illusion it may remain... ya inactiveness is mother of all the will remain as illusion otherwise.. nicely done.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/3/2010 3:42:00 PM)

    So true! Action speaks louder than words. A little poem with impact! ; D
    Read my, Tapestry Garden, you might enjoy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Sreekala Sukumaran (7/1/2010 10:46:00 AM)

    World peace should come true and not remain as a dream...Small but expressed so well... Thanks for sharing...10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 9, 2012

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