Puzzled Poem by Brian Purdy

Puzzled



Puzzled, I am
By the tepid response
Of those on whom I depended.
Must I walk alone this moonlit path
Stubbing my toes on crooked roots
Dislodging pebbles which signal my lonely passage?

Who guesses my destination
And waits my arrival? What angels watch,
While offering, like fitful stars,
Provision against these shadows,
Solace for my human faults?

And if my billy is empty
Yet still, I limber my sinews,
Contrive a liquid song to match my steps.
Tomorrow shall know my name - this I promise.

As for those who have failed me
As I in my life let others down - don't worry.
We each have opportunities
To offer familiar travelers food and lodging
But let those false-faced ones be sure
I read their names along this route - am not deluded.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 02 May 2012

Very well written piece on everyone's passage through life.

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Bulletcookie 2017 08 April 2012

Nice construction Brian. Puzzled Not! Thanks also for the inspiration.

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Sara Fielder 27 March 2012

I'm stunned. This is what they call poetry!

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Soulful Heart 20 March 2012

Ioneliness and search tangled into a song sad...........poetic lyrics stirring the chords unknown People and people around, Yet every soul a lonely creature. Lost in the maze of blogs and electronic mound, But yet to find a loving heart to nurture.

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Wahab Abdul 20 March 2012

very sad and lonely poem, inner expression is depicted well, a very good poem i like it,

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Brian Purdy

Brian Purdy

Belleville, Ontario
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