Pure Imagination Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Pure Imagination
The poet his imagination
About any kind of relation
Mostly it is spent on love and moon
The sun has o place even in noon
What a fun to experience?
When sailing over river's water at once!
The joy and cheers are always heard
The lover side by whispers the word
I find no charm with rain
The dark clouds pain pan
But poet makes it full of fun
The children rejoice and make ground run
The flowers are easy attraction
Petals, color make real combination
The scent smell is felt from blossom
As if the beautiful girl is inside room
Anyhow that is pure thoughtless drive
Lovers love and make cheers to survive
The love is painted with golden dream
The sun blesses with rays of bright beam
राजेश जायसवाल likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1
Aloha Hasmukh... Well my Friend... bard to bard... Houston, we have a problem..., with the analogy you present herein... The work and the content are well above satisfactory... nonetheless... The title suggests that what you wrote about is fantasy... last time I noticed... all of the subject materials you touched upon are everyday occurrences... I suggest that the digital animation scenes from the movie Avatar are more of the imagination than any reality here on earth... personal and private relations, the moon and sun, sailing, whispering, whimpering sweet nothings, children running and playing, making a rainy day go away, and, of course, those subjects, of flowers to women... and all unwritten thoughts in-between... ahem... these are reality... imagination, well as each of US knows, is a deep subject... sometimes deep and or wide... never knowing the extent of a subject... but pontificating upon it... that is imagination... or, do we agree to disagree on these points? I will to use your post... to exemplify my universal view of this posts subject title... and weave it to a more ponderable point of clarification... May I Sir? I am really good at this... having your thoughts influence my thoughts and wit... could be that bridge to somewhere... interesting? Check out a few of my posts, those which are dedicated to or inspired by my fellow word wrestling bards... I thank you for this burst of energy I have experienced just thinking about this comment... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.
okay.. Ayleen Guzman7 hours ago I like the idea of it, but it really doesn't make any sense. Maybe you need to practice your english?
I find no charm with rain The dark clouds pain pan But poet makes it full of fun The children rejoice and make ground run deepanshu6 hours ago Beautiful Comment +1
Cleverly poetic Joe Ross7 hours ago I can visualize 5 mini poems within this greater poem, and from those 5 mini poems, I see a story that has unfolded. Well written and expressed Comment +1
Good! Yam-tin Martin Wong6 hours ago There are two sides of a coin in nearly everything. Some poets do write from pure imagination while others do pen from real life experience they will ballad people's lives in weather of all sorts (My poem, Let my poems be...) My poem A Young Blind Man Weeping in a Subway Train was a real story that I witnessed 45 years ago in Toronto, Canada. The love is painted with golden dream: - again, some poets do that while other do write about unhappy love.
very nice Mrinmoy Choudhury7 hours ago Poem composed nicely - I love it. Comment +1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The poet his imagination About any kind of relation