Promise Poem by ramesh rai

Promise



Promises are made
for and on behalf of God
such promises are selfless
beyond all egos and flattering

Promises made on His behalf
are always nourished by his dignity
and fulfilled by His transcedent lae
like the promises made by a parent.

Promises have an heavenly touch
to get it fulfilled
for the sake of universal law

Promises have a friendly touch
sacrifice all mortal values of life
and self it becomes immortal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soulful Heart 07 February 2014

Very true the hope of promise that will b fulfiled and the hope of fulfilling a promise is what leads on....for self as well as for people around

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 February 2014

Beautiful poem on Promises..........Very true said, Promises have a friendly touch sacrifice all mortal values of life and self it becomes immortal. Beautiful flow of words. Penned it very well. Loved reading it.

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Kanav Justa 02 February 2014

Promises have an heavenly touch to get it fulfilled for the sake of universal law, , , wonderful lines, , ,

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