Profound Shore Poem by ramesh rai

Profound Shore

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I'm sitting at the shores of profound creation
Counting each Wave of Creation
Gazing ups and downs of Creation
Gazing at fathomless recreation of Creation
Wondering about its evolution and decay
Thinking reasons for evolution and decay
Befalling to get any reason of my thoughts
Enjoying poetry of every living and dormant Creation
Feeling myself as a knot of the creation
Waiting my turn to overlap with Creation
To leave my reminiscence in the creation.

Tuesday, October 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a poem of Dr. Antony Theodore
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 October 2015

Noble is the one who observes and appreciates all forms of creation. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2015

Enjoying poetry of every living and dormant Creation.: yes very true. You enjoy writing poetry and cherish it always. That is my feeling whenever I read your poems beloved Poet. I called you once “ Tagore”. Do you remember? To leave my reminiscence in the creation: Yes after our death we poets hope that our poetic creations will remain here and the generations to come will read and profit from them.. We shall hope for the best and die and wonderful death after fulfilling the purpose for which we were born.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 October 2015

Enjoying poetry of every living and dormant Creation. yes it is so true. You enjoy poetry and create poetry of special notes. it is so true. To leave my reminiscence in the creation. yes when we poets die, our poetic creations will remain here on earth. That will be our great gifts for the generation to come. thank you Ramesh Rai.

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