Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Pleasant Presence


All the candles
Were blown off
By breath's
Single puff
Children
Friends
And well-wishers
Greeted
'Happy birthday'
They cheered
When they
All gathered
And provided
A surprise
Much needed
Get together
So special it was
For the soul
Turning younger again
What a day it was
Made pleasant
By their presence.

Submitted: Sunday, February 23, 2014
Edited: Thursday, March 27, 2014

Topic of this poem: happiness


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  • Bronze Star - 6,572 Points * Sunprincess * (2/26/2014 3:50:00 PM)

    ......birthdays are special and gives one pleasant memories....wish everyday could be a birthday...with cake and ice cream and all the family and friends together... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,010 Points Valsa George (2/25/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    I know your Birthday was on a recent date... Was it on 23rd February? Any way a belated Birthday Greetings to a revered friend of Poem Hunter! ! May God bless you abundantly this year and in the years to come! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,908 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/24/2014 5:00:00 AM)

    Happy Birthday to Dear TC. May your aspiration and hope as a poet be fulfilled and let us enjoy your poems with smiles, while you spend your happy moments with your family and friends. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,767 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/23/2014 12:38:00 PM)

    Many Many Happy Returns of the Day! ! A Very Beautiful poem. A Pleasant Surprise really cheers our life.
    God Bless you! (Report) Reply

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