.passionate Love Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

.passionate Love

Rating: 5.0


Passionate eyes when meet
Sharing a glance as discreet
Fathoming bottom of heart
In domain of quixotic thought

Spreading bathetic wing
Flying in air with a swing
Like the wax in heat of light
Melting both soppy heart

Amative Love blossoms
During the spring season
To seek love and yearn
In utopian romantic sojourn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 26 September 2008

fine composition...a 10.

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Anand Dixit 26 September 2008

.....beautiful write.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 October 2008

good imaginative write on love...10

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Indira Renganathan 04 October 2008

Very decent poem of love...great

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Tsira Goge 05 October 2008

Hello Vidyadhar, You have caught precisely this spring to mood. You write beautifully and I like a melody and a rhythm of it a poem... 10.. (Thanks for comments also...) Tsira

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Lalitha iyer 23 April 2009

Eye to eye the voltage is high Passion peaks and looks speak

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 October 2008

Spreading bathetic wing Flying in air with a swing Like the wax in heat of light Melting both soppy heart wonderful passionate web of love yet fluffs in the wings of the void speads up by the mystery of flames heart bestirs by the gleams of blue..........fantastic expression of love when scintillates with grin of green that swoons the dream by desire, yet wrought ingenious of sparkled flow,10+, thanks for sharing

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Ramesh T A 10 October 2008

Utopian romantic sojourn is the dream of many! Nice Poem!

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Rakhi Jayashankar 08 October 2008

i hope i should get an ozford dictionary loolll nice workk 10

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Mamta Agarwal 07 October 2008

in silence itself love speaks and blossoms like flowers in spring, lovely poem from a fine poet -as always a pleasure to read.10 mamta

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