Paradoxical Alikes Poem by Sathya Narayana

good flow smooth poetry--- but red and saffron no longer appeal me as in their name lots of attrocieties happen in India.--So right now for me its BEWARE red ---saffron---beware. regards anju

I like the format of this poem. Unfortunately I am not familiar with most of the content; consequently, it does not mean much to me. I think it would be an effective poem for those who are. However, it does tell me something about you the poet-person.

Still some more lines needed to make impact on readers.Personally i don't like Manu and i wrote in telugu stree vada kavita 'manuvu kalam nundi tanuvu daasyam lone'.Good attempt.Sir you have not passed comments on my poem; Politicians-satire'

Rather good, I've read this style before, you did I good job. I don't have must experience as a critic so there.

I wish I could say more than it is a beautiful poem.I am not familiarize with its content.Sorry Dear Sathya Narayana! I am Brazilian! Best wishes Karla Bardanza

Really entertaining.

really good poem.i love it!

Simple and rythm is and sounds bold! Well written, I like it and give 10+++

STriking differences well brought out here. U get 10++...........

This is simply a wow... simple but so deep... More I read from you, more I love poetry...10 ++++