A Date With You Poem by Sathya Narayana

A Date With You

Rating: 5.0


You ask me: what I expect
Well! It is just a ‘date'.
While the abetting inky night
is writing down a tasteful menu,
in candle light just you and I,
Looking into each other's eyes;
our faces glowing in mild halos
amidst an expectant darkness
and screeching envious crickets.

Staring at each other as if
raring to bare our thoughts;
starting with hors d'oeuvre,
wine, up to a sweet dessert
allowing it to mature late
slowly, slyly, but surely
dissolving the inhibiting clout
fettering us for too long
to cut the ice
cuing coquettish passes,
forcing the gluttonous hearts break open
replete with unspelled passions
by those titillating slashes
from great Eros's floral stiletto
to spill out our secret wants
and chase out the dozing dark horse.

And, it all for now I thought!
Leave the remnant witching hours
to the great Cupid's verdict.

Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Booklover Tv Lounger 24 August 2008

Truly a joy to read. It showers you with pure emotion and passion. What more could a person want from a love poem. Excellent!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

....compact composition where loves passions thoughts are hugging each other. ++++10

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Shalini Kts 03 September 2008

a pure date with passionate love...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

10 for this lovely piece.

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Indira Babbellapati 16 September 2008

wonder if i can ever indulge in such sheer poetry!

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Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

An amazing write uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem and I am sure my aunt would felt the same of your youthful date.

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Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

This is really an amazing date uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem. Beautiful piece of your musings. Enjoyed the read and I am sure you would also like and enjoy my poem ' A date with a fool'

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Gayle Anne Goff 22 April 2009

YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY COMMENT ON YOUR POEM I DID IN MY LAST COMMENT I GAVE YOU A TEN PLUS TOLD YOU I WAS GLAD YOU MADE THE TO 500. LIKED THIS POEM

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Gayle Anne Goff 20 April 2009

GLAD YOU MADE THE TOP 500 GREAT POEM YOU GET A 10

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Michaela Tatualla 08 January 2009

Nice write! Keep it up!

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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