Pain Poem by J22 Poet

Pain



Sharp pins and needles
My arm has fallen asleep
I rub, forcefully
But there is still a poking
What pain! But, should I complain?

Friday, March 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: needle,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2017

Beautiful tanka cleverly presented. Thanks for sharing.

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J22 Poet 24 March 2017

Thank you!

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