Sara Panicali

Rookie - 10 Points (august 28 1990)

Only A Matter Of Moments


sitting here alone
with the thoughts of how things used to be
going crazy of wanting things back the way
they used to be
I kept trying to call and text
asking you for help
or at least just hear the comfort of your voice
I'm sitting here with a bottle of vodka and a razor blade
only a matter of moments
before I lose it
and run the razor down my veins

Submitted: Friday, November 04, 2011
Edited: Friday, November 04, 2011

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  • Bronze Star - 6,397 Points Lyn Paul (12/7/2014 4:13:00 PM)

    Heartfelt write. Writing for me releases so much pain. The title suits your poem so well.
    Thank you so much Sara I wish you well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (12/7/2014 10:27:00 AM)

    I find technical problems here. In L3 the preposition is wrong, the line doesn`t parse, as L7 doesn´t either. I would
    have liked to have read more content here, more background, this works OK, but it is very melodramatic. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,206 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (12/7/2014 8:20:00 AM)

    It is a difficult thing to comment one sitting with razor and telling few moments only and it is truly sad. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (12/7/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    Holy s desperation
    Portrayal of last truest moments
    We all need to know that we aren't abandoned and alone
    That there are so many people out there to support us, for us to fall back on..
    Being out of touch should not equate to spiraling away into darkness then death
    Just because others haven't called or texted, you should definitely reach out to them! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (12/7/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Holy s desperation
    Portrayal of last truest moments
    We all need to know that we aren't abandoned and alone
    That there are so many people out there to support us, for us to fall back on..
    Being out of touch should not equate to spiraling away into darkness then death
    Just because others haven't called or texted, you should definitely reach out to them! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 526 Points Dimitri Jagodinski (12/7/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    Well written. Sad piece. One that takes their own life gave up on life. When we rely on someone else to save us we all die unless we rely on God's love. This is a poem not of desperation but a need for attention. The ones who actually commit suicide never wanted help they just did it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shuja Zamir (12/7/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    only a matter of moments....took reader a moment to think & to praise...weldone... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,594 Points Bernard Snyder (12/7/2013 2:34:00 AM)

    The writing is excellent. But I pray things get better! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (12/7/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    WOW excellent piece very sad though, I'm sitting here with a bottle of vodka and a razor blade only a matter of moments deep great line, nice work and hope all is well.bl.e.ss. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jothi Lakshmi (12/7/2012 5:31:00 AM)

    lovely stated the terror (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 831 Points Harindhar Reddy (11/9/2011 1:38:00 PM)

    'I'm sitting here with a bottle of vodka and a razor blade
    only a matter of moments'

    Yes I say we poets have the religion! yes I say, I shout, I howl for our religion is sensitivity.
    A poignant poem with implicit meaning and explicit imagery... Great poem by a writer with lot of potential writer... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (11/4/2011 7:40:00 PM)

    I'm glad you didn't because it allowed you to write this very poignant peice. Fantastic work, painful to read and explicit imagery but fantastic (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,438 Points Dave Walker (11/4/2011 4:52:00 AM)

    A very sad but beautiful poem. A great write. (Report) Reply

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