Better This Way Poem by Sara Panicali

Better This Way

Rating: 5.0


I'm sorry it ended like this
Maybe it was better this way
Don't look at it as a loss
For you, this should be a plus
me not being around
you will only gain
and have everything
you ever dreamed
with out me getting in the way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 26 April 2012

you may find it better this way, but what he is thinking and feeling - who is to say!

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Makayla Straight 13 April 2012

I love how this flows. Im sorry you think this person is better without you. Sara I do not know you but from what you have emailed me you are a survivor. Maybe this person is not better without you but your better without them Thanks for sharing your work :) Best Wishes Kay Kay

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Dave Walker 12 April 2012

A really sad poem with a great flow to it.

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Blossom Mist 12 April 2012

simply beautiful..................... found it quiet realistic

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reminds me of innocence by AL. poem flows swiftly.

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