Sara Panicali

Rookie - 10 Points (august 28 1990)

Better this way


I'm sorry it ended like this
Maybe it was better this way
Don't look at it as a loss
For you, this should be a plus
me not being around
you will only gain
and have everything
you ever dreamed
with out me getting in the way

Submitted: Thursday, April 12, 2012

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  • Rookie - 575 Points Louis Rams (4/26/2012 9:32:00 AM)

    you may find it better this way, but what he is thinking and feeling - who is to say! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Makayla Straight (4/13/2012 3:53:00 PM)

    I love how this flows. Im sorry you think this person is better without you. Sara I do not know you but from what you have emailed me you are a survivor. Maybe this person is not better without you but your better without them
    Thanks for sharing your work :)
    Best Wishes
    Kay Kay (Report) Reply

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