This Will Be My Last Poem by Sara Panicali

This Will Be My Last

Rating: 5.0


</></></></>I can't keep putting this off much longer
I try so hard to get through these times
without you by my side
I've been doing okay
well at least for now

I can't keep putting this off much longer
these thoughts and feelings
of wanting to end my life
night after night
I sit here and think of
which way would be best

I can't keep putting this off much longer
I keep crying myself to sleep
getting drunk til I can't even stand on me feet
and writing hoping these thoughts will go away
I know I won't be able to put this off much longer
these feelings and thoughts
of wanting to end my life
and which way would be best
because next time I get like this
it will definitely be my last

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 06 November 2011

A great mean of loyalty and true love, it's a Masterpiece, I wish he returns to you and be side by side with you, but by the time if he doesn't then he doesn't deserve and you have to know that God loves and want for you a better one than him, trust me, you have to believe that. anyway, I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem :)

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Nina Andrew 06 November 2011

It's a sad poetry and keep up ur great work But ur a great poetry writer and I love this poem It makes me cry :)

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 November 2011

i see your pain and love for him that make you feel like that you see, your talent is a nice way of getting over him and starting a new life do not waste your life to a bad situation a poet so good would be a big loss

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Zoe Christo 18 November 2011

Too depressing for me.

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Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

You have amazing knack of expressing your feeling in the form poems in an enticing manner. Simple is your style but carries ample source and reassurance. Good generation of Ideas! But suicidal tendency is not appreciable hope You change that feeling! 10+++++++++++ 'I can't keep putting this off much longer these thoughts and feelings'

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Robert Roberts 08 November 2011

suicide is a common way of escaping our fears we believe we cant deal with but most of the time all we got to do is to attack it head on. nice writing sara and know the night is still young as long as we have breath

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Kiran Sam 08 November 2011

Good poignant lines in all your poems, very simple and straight expression.U drive home the idea very well too. But try to be a little more poetic in your lines.

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Romeo Della Valle 07 November 2011

Go for it, Sara! You can do it for you are young and talented! You are among true friends and in the right site! Let it all out of your chest, write, write and keep on writing and let's all know about your tender feelings! 10+++God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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