One Evening Just For You! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

One Evening Just For You!

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I know not to measure the fragrance of flowers
Nor I am a jeweller to know the value of uncut raw diamond
Vehemence glow from precious diamond
Cannot remain hidden for longer time
Its luminosity will shine from far behind.
Dedicated to our loved celebrity of our hearts!

When she enters the stage with her mesmerising steps
Drizzling rains will mingle on each steps beats she takes
When her anklet bells jingles rich chime sounds rings in air
Aroma of freshness will spring in air
Our evening will be made delightful ever with sweet memories of here!

Value of art is immense
Its depth can never be measured
When art lingers in artist's soul
Her each steps are her breathe she takes
That one cannot separate art from artist!
It's not the art but
It's the beauty of soul that we can see in artist!
We should appreciate this divinely blessed inborn gift
With the thunders of clapping!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Monday, October 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 06 October 2014

Both Hindi and English versions of the poem are pieces of beauty but in my humble opinion this one has an edge over the other.

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Salini Nair 07 October 2014

Value of art is immense Its depth can never be measured When art lingers in artist's soul Her each steps are her breathe she takes That one cannot separate art from artist! ...................very true said.....art is the soul side of the artist

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Ramesh Rai 07 October 2014

Thank you so much Geethajee for wonderful clapping. Rightly said, It's not the art but It's the beauty of soul that we can see in artist! We should appreciate this divinely blessed inborn gift With the thunders of clapping! Thank you so much once again.

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Valsa George 07 October 2014

This is a fantastic write Geetha! I wish to give you a thunderous clap! But you can't hear it! So I give you a10 Drizzling rains will mingle on each steps beats she takes When her anklet bells jingles rich chime sounds rings in air........ Lovely lines!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 October 2014

Value of art is immense Its depth can never be measured A soulful performance moves all those who witness it. What an evening it is!

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Kee Thampi 20 October 2014

This poetess touches the root of soul to remind the temptations When art lingers in artist's soul Her each steps are her breathe she takes That one cannot separate art from artist! It's not the art but lovable rhymes

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Kee Thampi 20 October 2014

This poetess touches the root of soul to remind the temptations When art lingers in artist's soul Her each steps are her breathe she takes That one cannot separate art from artist! It's not the art but lovable rhymes it will be beyond words

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Dinesan Madathil 12 October 2014

But for the technical lapses this poem would have been of a Romantic poet`s superb drafts in poetry. Excellent in execution and conclusion. A fine write from you Geetha.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 October 2014

A very inspiring poem dedicated to art and artist is a phenomenal piece indeed......Geetha......beautifully crafted Full marks

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Neela Nath Das 10 October 2014

It's not the art but It's the beauty of soul that we can see in artist! - - - - - -Geetha these lines are gems indeed.

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