Once Upon An Autumn Day Poem by Joseph T. Renaldi

Once Upon An Autumn Day

Rating: 4.6


Once Upon an autumn day,
Colorful leaves began to fade
In the midst of a chilly, frosty air
As multitude of trees grew steadily bare.

Once upon an autumn day,
The whispering breeze was here to stay
Moving aimlessly through the countless trees
Scattering leaves with the greatest of ease.

Once upon an autumn day,
The leaves whirled freely in every way,
Until at last they came to rest
Finding a haven in which to nest.

Once upon an autumn day,
The trees were dormant, and the leaves lay
Waiting for the winter snow to fall
To quickly obscure them one and all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deci Hernandez 10 October 2012

Great job, with classic style. poem should have been written two hundred years ago. but i'm reading it now, watching the leaves fall.

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Hopeu Likadapoem 09 August 2005

This is great.We were both writing a fall poem at the same time! ! ! !

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JOSEPH...STUMBLED UPON THIS VINTAGE PIECE OF YOURS, AND PUT THE BRAKES ON...THIS IS FINE WORK....THE IMAGEWORX ALONE PAINT THE BACKDROP OF APICTORIAL GRANDEUR...STRUCTURE OF THE WORK IS WELL CRAFTED AS IS THE SMOOTH FLUXION THROUHOUT...I MUST REVISIT YOUR WORK AGAIN, AND WILL...FJR

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Mark Dillon 10 October 2012

nice poem, so many vivid and rich colours in autumn, its great to walk in the park and watch the leaves flowing in the strong breeze.

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Hazel Durham 10 October 2012

Great rhythm and flow depicting so well autumn in all its glory!

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Squeegee Duck 21 September 2019

lovely poem with wonderful imagination of Autumn

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BEAUTIFUL POEM! THANKS, I'VE BEEN NEW ON THIS SITE. THANKS AGAIN FOR SHARING THIS! ! ! ! YES, AND THE SPEAKER IN THE ABOVE POEM IS NOT CLEAR AND SPEAKING VERY SLOWLY. PLEASE CHANGE IT! ! !

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wendy kiktr 03 September 2018

why is she speaking so slow but it is a good poem

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Norah Tunney 01 April 2016

Yes I love the flow of this poem I feel the freedom of wind and leaves Yes a 10

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Brian Skyers 06 July 2014

the second of yours iv'e read, it flows nicely and I can see all that you say.

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Joseph T. Renaldi

Joseph T. Renaldi

Frackville, Pennsylvania
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