Joseph T. Renaldi

Freshman - 929 Points (Frackville, Pennsylvania)

Once Upon An Autumn Day - Poem by Joseph T. Renaldi

Once Upon an autumn day,
Colorful leaves began to fade
In the midst of a chilly, frosty air
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Comments about Once Upon An Autumn Day by Joseph T. Renaldi

  • Norah Tunney Norah Tunney (4/1/2016 10:46:00 PM)

    Yes I love the flow of this poem
    I feel the freedom of wind and leaves
    Yes a 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Brian Skyers (7/6/2014 3:33:00 AM)

    the second of yours iv'e read, it flows nicely and I can see all that you say. (Report) Reply

  • Jack Growden Jack Growden (10/10/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    Well written, I have also written about the intriguing season of autumn. It is titled Autumn Leaves. Feel free to read, rate and comment on my work. Thanks: http: //www.poemhunter.com/jack-growden-2/ (Report) Reply

  • Akanksha Bhatt Akanksha Bhatt (10/14/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    very nice! thanks for sharing! i liked it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Deci Hernandez (10/10/2012 3:27:00 PM)

    Great job, with classic style. poem should have been written two hundred years ago. but i'm reading it now, watching the leaves fall. (Report) Reply

  • Nurain Ali-balogun Nurain Ali-balogun (10/10/2012 1:35:00 PM)

    Packed with so much beauty. I've never experienced autumn before but your poem makes me yearn to. Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Sarojini Pattayat Sarojini Pattayat (10/10/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    [waiting for the winter snow to fall-]
    enhancing imagination. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham Hazel Durham (10/10/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    Great rhythm and flow depicting so well autumn in all its glory! (Report) Reply

  • Mark Dillon Mark Dillon (10/10/2012 6:49:00 AM)

    nice poem, so many vivid and rich colours in autumn, its great to walk in the park and watch the leaves flowing in the strong breeze. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/13/2006 4:08:00 PM)

    JOSEPH...STUMBLED UPON THIS VINTAGE PIECE OF YOURS, AND PUT THE BRAKES ON...THIS IS FINE WORK....THE IMAGEWORX ALONE PAINT THE BACKDROP OF APICTORIAL GRANDEUR...STRUCTURE OF THE WORK IS WELL CRAFTED AS IS THE SMOOTH FLUXION THROUHOUT...I MUST REVISIT YOUR WORK AGAIN, AND WILL...FJR (Report) Reply

  • Hopeu Likadapoem (8/9/2005 11:20:00 AM)

    This is great.We were both writing a fall poem at the same time! ! ! ! (Report) Reply










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