Joseph T. Renaldi

Freshman - 505 Points (Frackville, Pennsylvania)

Once Upon An Autumn Day - Poem by Joseph T. Renaldi

Once Upon an autumn day,
Colorful leaves began to fade
In the midst of a chilly, frosty air
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Comments about Once Upon An Autumn Day by Joseph T. Renaldi

  • Rookie - 51 Points Brian Skyers (7/6/2014 3:33:00 AM)

    the second of yours iv'e read, it flows nicely and I can see all that you say. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (10/10/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    Well written, I have also written about the intriguing season of autumn. It is titled Autumn Leaves. Feel free to read, rate and comment on my work. Thanks: http: //www.poemhunter.com/jack-growden-2/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/14/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    very nice! thanks for sharing! i liked it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deci Hernandez (10/10/2012 3:27:00 PM)

    Great job, with classic style. poem should have been written two hundred years ago. but i'm reading it now, watching the leaves fall. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (10/10/2012 1:35:00 PM)

    Packed with so much beauty. I've never experienced autumn before but your poem makes me yearn to. Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarojini Pattayat (10/10/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    [waiting for the winter snow to fall-]
    enhancing imagination. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,896 Points Hazel Durham (10/10/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    Great rhythm and flow depicting so well autumn in all its glory! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/10/2012 6:49:00 AM)

    nice poem, so many vivid and rich colours in autumn, its great to walk in the park and watch the leaves flowing in the strong breeze. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 42,839 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/13/2006 4:08:00 PM)

    JOSEPH...STUMBLED UPON THIS VINTAGE PIECE OF YOURS, AND PUT THE BRAKES ON...THIS IS FINE WORK....THE IMAGEWORX ALONE PAINT THE BACKDROP OF APICTORIAL GRANDEUR...STRUCTURE OF THE WORK IS WELL CRAFTED AS IS THE SMOOTH FLUXION THROUHOUT...I MUST REVISIT YOUR WORK AGAIN, AND WILL...FJR (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hopeu Likadapoem (8/9/2005 11:20:00 AM)

    This is great.We were both writing a fall poem at the same time! ! ! ! (Report) Reply








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