Omni Presence Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Omni Presence

Rating: 4.3


He is

Can we deny his presence and claim He is not everywhere?
Will it be proper for us to confine him in such a way as fare?
How long will it take for us to understand about his presence?
It will have to be long drawn conclusions as an essence

We find him in every small particles of thing
We can't term it merely as coincidence or something
Why trees shake their branches and welcome the change?
Only some of human beings don’t recognize and it's very strange

Does the Sun have any need to rise as per schedule?
Are there any set norms or fitted in module?
We have no answers and still go on disputing the theory
It is unfortunate and we can only regret later on or feel sorry

Sun hangs in balance and so the galaxy as whole
Moon, stars and Milky Way are all there to play a role
We need to reason it out and consider it as reality
There is no use to deny its existence and loose our morality

Do we have to pay anything for water and free air?
Has anybody thought over who controls it and from where?
We all know it from heart that it is omni presence that only guides
We simply deny it and stick to the rigid stand and hide

He is with us in despair, happiness love and hate
We fail to understand and accept it very late
We may be following him with different faith and angle
He is there to see and take us away from possible struggle

It may look strange but fact can't be denied
We need not be reactive and try to walk on fast tract
This will hurt Him too much and lead us to discomfort
We must also prepare our selves when time comes to report

'Come to my fold and give me all your worries'
Golden words read from all the holy books and carries
The rituals, principles belief and compassion for others
How you please thyself is the only theme and it matters?

Take resolve to heart that nothing will be done to alienate
Not to hurt anybody's feelings and subjugate or subordinate
It is noble life that we have to follow and coordinate
Different faith but prayers same and his greatness to narrate

It is better late than never to accept the holy message
Why do we create hatred instead of love and block the passage?
Do we think that it will please almighty as good gesture?
Will it not be impeding our path and lead us to dark future?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

Can we deny his presence and claim He is not everywhere? Will it be proper for us to confine him in such a way as fare? .. how can we...10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 05 July 2010

Can we deny his presence and claim He is not everywhere? Will it be proper for us to confine him in such a way as fare? .. no one can deny presence.....10

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 01 March 2010

Dear Mr Hasmukhlalji, As requested, I could find some time to go through your poem 'omni presence' As a matter of fact nobody can deny His existence. Still there are questions in mind when devastations come in the shape of Tsunami, Earthquake etc. The religious preachers told us that He takes test of our faith on Him. So the visions might be different but truth remain truth only, As you know, I always like smaller poems and mostly write in free verse. Still I liked your poem and rated highly Rajkumar

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Kelly Aragon 27 February 2010

I liked it. It was well written. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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