Dom Hunt

Rookie - 13 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

Oh Winds Of Time


Oh winds of time blow me
To the past or to the future
But don't stay still today
Take me to the birth of my children
Or moments of endless care
Let me see the dawn of a brand new day
Forward to joyful anticipation 
Bring to me the first day
When loved blossomed full
Move over the mountains of today
To the valley of promise
Or back to the first time
I held her in my arms
Felt her heart beat with mine
Bring me to a still place for my soul
My mind can be free again
Thoughts that are filled with hope
That moment so long ago I first saw her
Unsettled I became at such beauty 
Oh winds of time
Blow anywhere but today

Submitted: Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, September 19, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Oh Winds Of Time by Dom Hunt )

  • Veteran Poet - 3,037 Points Valerie Dohren (1/16/2013 4:24:00 PM)

    Beautiful write - longings to revisit past happiness or looking to future hopes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Amanda Laurent (12/18/2012 8:49:00 PM)

    Wonderful words, full of longing and nostalgia! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (11/5/2012 2:04:00 PM)

    Another good one from down under. Read mine - We the Unencumbered -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/23/2012 8:23:00 PM)

    Deep and Moving! A very well crafted and touching write that is rich in meaningful words and imagery! I like it very much! 10+++Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I will read some more of your works later on! Keep up the good work and God Bless You! Romeo-New York City http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Indranil Bhaduri (9/19/2012 2:23:00 AM)

    Beautiful expressions sir. Loved it! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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