Dom Hunt

Rookie - 13 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

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  • Rookie Susan Eltone (7/22/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Dom, Happiness; good use of asimile and metaphor, nicely written. T Love You Are The Words; unrequited love. part of life lessons. Was This Always You; very prospective, people do change part of the core of character remains unchanged. I like your style of prose. Good work, I sense you put some serious effort in your work. Stay in touch, Eltone

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A touch of skin

A touch of skin
A stirring
My hands move over the beauty of you
I am entranced
So soft
Like silkĀ 
You turn towards me
My heart poundsĀ 
I feel your breath

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