''Oh My Dreams''! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

''Oh My Dreams''!

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Oh, My dreams! If you had wings,
I would have made you,
To one of the finest feathers-
In iridescent tail of a peacock,
To dance and sing zealously
On the top of a Mountain of Joy,
When I see the violent Storm
In the Sky of my heart
Until I find a Rainbow of Hope
To stop the shower of grief
From the eyes of my Dark Clouds
That has been gathered in my heart.

Tuesday, June 25, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 25 June 2013

A great poem, we all need hope.

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Pramod Thomas 26 June 2013

good poem...keep up the spirit

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 August 2013

Beautiful poem Vipins..You have used a great combination of nature in your poem which added the flavour to beauty of dreams of dreams...loved it.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 05 July 2013

Beautiful poem Vip, good to have you back man. Siya_! !

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Poetheart Morgan 03 July 2013

I love the rhythm and how you express your love for her! ! ! Lindo Poet! ! !

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Valsa George 29 June 2013

Dreams taking wings and flying to the mountains of joy! A capturing image! Enjoyed the poem! Nice to see you back after a long interval!

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Unwritten Soul 26 June 2013

Hmmm i really like this simple poem so beautiful _Soul

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