Of Her Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Of Her

Rating: 4.9


Intoxicating warm of her palm,
Fascinating shine of her eyes
And alluring ridges of her body,
Annoying the sleep of dreams!

Monday, November 14, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
(De Va) 15 November 2011

Epic....love the simplicity, it says so very much....smiles.n blessings

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Crimson Love 20 November 2011

Beautiful poem, all of your words were beautiful! Phenomenal poem! :)

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Sara Hosseini 19 November 2011

very brief and inclusive! Liked it

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Nicolas Thomas 19 November 2011

beautifuly short :) (i dnt understand why do i have to put at least 20 letters in a comment)

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Hans Vr 19 November 2011

Short and very sweet; well written Vipins

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Dave Walker 17 November 2011

Like it, great poem. Good poem.

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