Offer In Response Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

She had nothing to offer in response
The argument and counter was so intense
None of us wanted to fall an inch backward
As some of the accusations were never heard

It is openly believed that love thrive only on trust
It is laid down criteria and there is no special insistence or thrust
If one wants to stay long in race and achieve
It is got to be adhered and believed

If any one of the willing partner has something to hide
They may compromise on certain issued and not confide
Thus weakening the very foundation or strong base
Then there will be trust erosion and wrong chase

A chase never dreamed of and far from reality
As love always unite the people with fine quality
Nothing comes on the way if two are longing for each other
Only one aim in life to remain together and forever

I sensed some thing had developed wrongly
So far we quiet peaceful and lead happily
I hurried back to defuse the situation
As it would have played havoc with its continuation

As I looked back to find out
She was seen serious and was to turn about
The worry lines clearly reflected on her face
I could feel so sorry but pained heavily to trace

I knew she would pounce on me severely
As it had hurt her pride and honor immensely
But it was not of my doing at all
It had developed all of sudden at wrong call

Females are gifted with kind heart
It is really good quality and fine art
Generally gents are considered stupid and unreasonable
But females pull the cart successfully without inviting troubles

I caught her attention by pleading innocently
It was earnest appeal made so gently
It made impact and cut the ice silently
Her voice got clear and spoke again fluently

She was all for great smile again
I could remove the agony and pain
This is now seen as no show down
But to admit frankly mistakes and own