Jahan zaib

Rookie - 55 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Not long ago


Passed all the days of my spring
Back, my love can I never bring
Held me tightly to thine white breast
All day, all night, where I could rest
Time went by, I lost my charm
touch of the lips, my resting arm
Threw me away, like tree throws a leaf
Life in your arms was short and brief
Leave me not, when I need the most
Keep me in thine eyes, be my host

Submitted: Saturday, March 09, 2013

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  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (4/19/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    in a way i kind of dislike you cause i don't like crying and you happens to do that every time with your spectacular poems...........i am speechless by this piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (3/23/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    this poem conveys a very strange yet powerful message.....great write....so true and sophihistical poem, , thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (3/12/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Kiss on the rose, we may found love
    Of beauty and the smell lingers
    Just cant make it forever with us
    Because nothing is eternal...
    but the touch on your lips
    has been stained
    by the memory
    When you and a rose
    Kissed
    That forever will be
    In wandering soul_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,387 Points Valsa George (3/10/2013 11:10:00 AM)

    Your intense longing to retrieve the lost love is beautifully expressed! A very emotive write! ! (Report) Reply

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