Jahan zaib

Rookie - 96 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Not Long Ago - Poem by Jahan zaib

Passed all the days of my spring
Back, my love can I never bring
Held me tightly to thine white breast
All day, all night, where I could rest
Time went by, I lost my charm
touch of the lips, my resting arm
Threw me away, like tree throws a leaf
Life in your arms was short and brief
Leave me not, when I need the most
Keep me in thine eyes, be my host

Comments about Not Long Ago by Jahan zaib

  • Rookie - 11 Points Sahil Sood (4/27/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    a lovely poem sir.. Reflecting perfect emotions of a man.. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (4/26/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    A very fab poem dat can be related generally to any men. Kudos poet. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (4/24/2013 5:01:00 PM)

    Catch while catch can. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (4/19/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    in a way i kind of dislike you cause i don't like crying and you happens to do that every time with your spectacular poems...........i am speechless by this piece (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,269 Points Vishal Sharma (3/23/2013 4:41:00 AM)

    this poem conveys a very strange yet powerful message.....great write....so true and sophihistical poem, , thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Persian Khushi (3/12/2013 4:47:00 PM)

    dear poet, a raw yearning of emotions displayed... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,497 Points Unwritten Soul (3/12/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Kiss on the rose, we may found love
    Of beauty and the smell lingers
    Just cant make it forever with us
    Because nothing is eternal...
    but the touch on your lips
    has been stained
    by the memory
    When you and a rose
    That forever will be
    In wandering soul_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (3/10/2013 11:10:00 AM)

    Your intense longing to retrieve the lost love is beautifully expressed! A very emotive write! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 9, 2013

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