Treasure Island

Jahan zaib

(February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

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I desire everyone to be rude
Giving me no attention
Ignoring me
When time brings them close
They pass by, without giving smile
Even not showing
They recognize me.
As one day a friend I was
No need of nice people
I need not company
Adorable or friends loyal
No. that is not that I am not nice
But just
It makes me worried and sad
I will have to leave one day
Or they will go
And I can't bear it.

Submitted: Wednesday, February 20, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, February 20, 2013

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  • Karen Sinclair (5/15/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    i understand this so well after loosing my beautiful sister i just wanted to move to an uninhabited island to live rather than deal with the sordid wretched pain of death and loss again... (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (2/27/2013 7:24:00 AM)

    I agree with unwritten soul, even though people leave us we still have the love..
    and sure they still have love for us..dear jahan it is a part of life, to change and
    grow..sure I would love to see you give this one a title...it is a fabulous write! (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (2/21/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    no, no, no. Where is the love that lay inside the poet? ? ? ? ?
    If we are here has a great purpose. Neither you nor I nor anyone else can answer these questions or questioning. Only accept. and know that is solved. Where is my friend? (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (2/20/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    Soul makes many great points.
    Should you choose to live alone you must sacrifice much.
    It will be hard...we are animals that like to run in packs.
    But there are people that make a success of living alone...and happily.
    But it does not mean they have no friends.
    To be pure in heart and of the soul you must venture alone on a quest to some form of a desert. Desert means
    desolation... a place that seems to be full of nothing. Here the conventional is stripped off you and you are laid bare of all concepts. This way you can realize the true meanings of life... what is life, what is love to life, what is death, and is there life after death. Only when you have answered such question can you return to the world of
    meaningless and become a productive part of life...capable of maintaining personal relationships with other people without judging or fearing them and how they affect your life. (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (2/20/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    Soul makes many great points.
    Should you choose to live alone you must sacrifice much.
    It will be hard...we are animals that like to run in packs.
    But there are people that make a success of living alone...and happily.
    But it does not mean they have no friends.
    To be pure in heart and of the soul you must venture alone on a quest to some form of a desert. Desert means
    desolation... a place that seems to be full of nothing. Here the conventional is stripped off you and you are laid bare of all concepts. This way you can realize the true meanings of life... what is life, what is love to life, what is death, and is there life after death. Only when you have answered such question can you return to the world of
    meaningless and become a productive part of life...capable of maintaining personal relationships with other people without judging or fearing them and how they affect your life. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (2/20/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    You know, somehow it has a deep effect on me, i just speechless...and i cant say many words but to pretend that way wont solve the problem anyway, you will be surrounded by black clouds around your mind and thundering pressure on your emotion inside...you know people say people die but love stay..if you know this u will understand......._Soul (Report) Reply

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