No More Claims! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

No More Claims!

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A promise of word she keeps,
As she made to you long back dear,

The time had come to put a full stop here.
One path ends here as
The board read the warning sign there.
So now,
No more trespassing will be done,
As she noted it down long back.

No more claim on this path
As it does not belongs to her dear.
This path for her ends here.

With a deep pain she wish to tell,
No more claims further ahead.
Reverting back to her next path thereby,

Wishing you all the best,
on your beautiful come back
To build a dream of castles.
Once again in this beautiful planet dear!

Today nothing is left in her hands,
With an empty hands….
All she can pray for you and tell.....
God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !


Dec 3,2013.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Sunday, December 8, 2013
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rubab Atwal 08 December 2013

An excellent poem, really enjoyed it.....

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Kee Thampi 08 December 2013

My dearest poetess again writes......... Wishing you all the best, on your beautiful come back To build a dream of castles. Once again in this beautiful planet dear!

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Dee Corpolongo 08 December 2013

A positive poem well enjoyed. Thank you! (and for your comments!)

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 December 2013

No more claims. no more extra expectations. no more empty abilities. i have a special feeling to the verse: build a dream of castle. it is written so nicely. you are a talented gifted poet. i enjoyed this work so much.

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Soumita Sarkar 10 December 2013

a good stroke of pen..........

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 January 2015

Nice emotional poem with great message of conviction and courage........Geetha........amazing write.......10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 September 2014

Today nothing is left in her hands, With an empty hands…. All she can pray for you and tell..... God bless you dear with all my heart! ! ! A poem giving a message of firm determination.

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Anish Chouhan 08 January 2014

Today nothing is left in her hands, With an empty hands…. superb

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

With empty hands…. All she can pray for you Wishing well at the end. Nice write.

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Wahab Abdul 11 December 2013

congratulations! this became a hot poem from India.. kudos..

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