My Gift Poem by Aishwarya Premkumar

My Gift

Rating: 3.3


A beauty of your kind
Have I never seen,
A comfort very soothing.
Your eyes give me endless gift
Wonder what that gift might be.....
Which energizes and sweetens life.
Your picturesque smile means
A lot to me....
Your footprints have a great impact
In my soft little heart!
I stand under your shade
But you are moving away.....
Are people disturbing you?

I'll protect you my love
My heart of love forever
For you,
MY NATURE.
A better word for you 'My life'........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Aishwarya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ratneswar Brahmachari 07 November 2010

Thank u for ur beautiful creation.So lucid and easygoing flow.

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Elbert Matt Loubser 06 November 2010

A very pure poem, not tainted by the world and its expectations. It is well written because it is true to who you are.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 31 October 2010

Beautiful gift indeed. You have got your power of expression through poem. So, run....run long to beautify the earth with your all treasures sublime in subconscious which want to come out as poetry. Thanks for your invitation. Love is the last reach of the whole civilization otherwise there will be no trace of human being on earth or in universe. Fantastic your writing of giving love not expecting any return. LIVE LONG...write more.. 10/10 Regards, pranab

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