Busy Life Poem by Aishwarya Premkumar
Busy Life
I sat in a corner
Deeply thinking
About mysteries in life.
Stress and tension
Swallowing our time.
Life in rush
With no peaceful mind.
And guilt making man
Go crazy.
Complications beginning as dropped
Into the mother land;
Days and months pass by
Without any happy moments....
We blink and wink
With problems near
Enveloping in fear.
Leading a miserable life
Indeed! .....
Burdens, burdens in every part
No time even to enjoy.
Pains filling heart
Trapping out joy.
Our thoughts full of
Work, Goal and Success..
But where is happiness?
Find it
It is within you............
Never I find happiness, I am strictly a peace-seeker. Better ecstasy could substitute the happiness. Very well written turbulance of the existence and passion for the life beyond life. Your You is perfect in use as a last line. Beautiful. Yes, a you is must to exist and to swim the ocean of time.10 again out of ten as my liking. Regards, pranab
Its quite insulting to see a girl your age writing an awesome poem like that.dont give up
Quite rightly written, thought provoking and alarming for our race.
Your English is good and the poem moves along fine with a nice ending you have talent so read read a lot and the world is at your feet...regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:56:07 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very nice poem, this is truth of present day world, but life is beyond it as you correctly concluded