One In A Million Poem by Aishwarya Premkumar

One In A Million

Rating: 3.0


Rarely can I stand near
And spend time...
Those precious minutes in my life,
Gives me eternal happiness -
Which kept bouncing within me,
Unknowing where to fly.

Your beautiful eyes
And everlasting smile
Has a secret place
In my heart;
Blooming with your
Love and Care.

The Creator carved the sculpture
And gave it to me,
A Gift which I will never lose.
With special care
Will Protect..

It hurts when Iam far
It's for you I live,
Oh! My intimate love
My sweet friend
I owe you everything
I love you a lot.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Sounds like a truly wonderful unconditional love that frees the soul and takes flight into depths of serenity! Love your style of writing! Thank you for such a beautiful poem! RoseAnn

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Rohan Roy 09 November 2010

its truly magnificent..

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Ratneswar Brahmachari 07 November 2010

Brilliant in chosing words, excellent in crafting, really awesome creation.Write more for us.

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Ken E Hall 07 November 2010

A well written love poem nice to read...you show a lot of promence and now I think next you should come up with something original something you...nobody else give a try...regards

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 07 November 2010

You are very philosophical at this tender age. A gal of teens will write poems on love that is real. Are you more thoughtful than other? Y? more lonely? Your poem shows that you are not social.

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